Rosepaw
Apprentice
Don't be afraid to die...They're waiting for you...
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Post by Rosepaw on Aug 4, 2007 18:24:36 GMT -5
1 Rosestar was nervous. She had just became the leader of RoseClan. How would she break the news to the other Clans! "It's just a gathering!!" Rosestar turned her head to see her deputy, Mudtail walking beside her. "I know! It's just that I'm really nervous to go in front of SnowClan, RockClan, LillyClan, and StarClan!! You would understand if you were leader." She mumbled. "Don't worry! The whole Clan is there to support you! Every cat knows that you are a great and loyal cat!! So why are you nervous?" Mudtail said. Rosestar sighed.
Rosestar jumped on top of the great rock. Every cat looked puzzled except RoseClan. They looked proud and confident. Russetstar, leader of RockClan asked, "So I guess Heartstar died? He was getting weak and green cough was killing lots of cats." Rosestar nodded. "I wish he were here...I'm not ready for this job yet!" Russetstar touched noses with Rosestar. "Don't worry...I'm on your side" Rosestar felt relieved. Dawnstar leader of SnowClan and Cinderstar of LillyClan came up on the great rock. "Well look who's up with the leaders! Don't worry, every thing will be fine!" Rosestar felt even more relieved after the beautiful she-cat had told her not to worry. Cinderstar looked frustrated and sad at the same time. "What's wrong?" Rosestar asked the depressed tom. "Well, Heartstar was one of my good friends, and she said not to worry about her green cough but I guess he really didn't mean it." Rosestar touched noses with Cinderstar. Russetstar nodded to Rosestar. She yelled for the cats attention. She didn't know what to say so she looked at Russetstar. He nodded. Rosestar said "Um...I have some bad news. Heartstar has joined StarClan. He died a few days ago. But he still walks with us." All the cats except some LillyClan cats bowed their heads. After some time Dawnstar said, "Our Clan has been doing well. Theres nothing to report." Dawnstar nodded at Cinderstar. "Well, Owleyes just gave birth to 5 healthy kits. They will be apprenticed in 3 moons. Other then that, every thing has been going well." He turned to Russetstar. "We just ran a badger out of our territory and into SnowClans territory." None of the cats seemed mad. Northsong of SnowClan said, "We'll kill it." Russetstar turned to Rosestar and said "Let's all give a welcome to Rosestar!!" All the cats chanted "Rosestar! Rosestar"
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Post by Mistynight on Aug 5, 2007 1:30:37 GMT -5
Wow, that is really good. I actually am very interested in this one. I will make sure to check this one out everyday. I love all the names you have there! And i hope you continue with this story.
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Rosepaw
Apprentice
Don't be afraid to die...They're waiting for you...
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Post by Rosepaw on Aug 6, 2007 16:38:07 GMT -5
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Rosestar lead her Clan back ot their camp. Mudtail said, "Great job up there! I don't mean to be mean when I see this but I think our Clan will do much better with you as Clan leader. Heartstar was kina unfair and some of the Clan members got mad with him." Rosestar was suprised to hear thoses words come out of his mouth. She replied, "Why did StarClan give him 9 lives? Why did StarClan chose him as leader then? Can you tell me?" Mudtail said "That's my opinoin, Don't be so mean about it!" Rosestar sighed. "Sorry. The stress is getting ot me. I think I'm lackig of sleep witch makes the stress worse, that's all." Mudtail rubbed ageinst her then went back to talk with his friend, Voleclaw."
When RoseClan got home from the journey to the gathering, all the cats who had stayed came out and asked, "How'd it go? How did the other cats react?" Rosestar announced, "Every thing went well and the other cats were fine." Rosestar was so tired that she ran straight to her new den. It had the smell Heartstar's sent.
Soon, Rosestar was in a deep sleep. She found herself walking by the river. "How'd I get here?" Rosestar shrugged and kept walking along. "Hello siser." Rosestar turned around to see herself in front of her brother, Nightsky. "Oh brother, I've missed you so much! I wish you were still with me so I could be with you! This job is so hard!" Rosestar moaned. "Rosestar, I will always be with you." She bowed her head and looked up to see her brother once more, but he was gone.
"Rosestar! Rosestar! You slep in!!" Rosestar opened her eyes. "Rise and sine!" She saw Mudtail nuding her. She laughed. "I'm up!" She got up the streched. "Rosestar, tonight I think Berrypaw and Creampaw should be made warriors. They're past due and they've been working their tails of to become warriors!" Mudtail said happily. "I told Heartstar. But he said their mentors were one of the ones who tried ot kill him at the end. So I really do think they're ready. I'll go tell them right now." She nodded and walked off. She found Berrypaw and Creampaw cleaning them slefs by the fresh kill pile. Creampaw looked up. "Hey Rosestar!" Berrypaw noddeda respectful hello. Rosestar said, "Your mentors and Muntail have been talking. We think you two are ready to become warriors. Do you think you deserve this?" Bother toms shook their heads speachless. "Very well then. Tonight, you two will become warriors!!" The apprentices looked happy. Rosestar went ot tell their mentors who seemed happy. Rosestar was ready to give the apprentices the warrior names!
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Post by Mistynight on Aug 6, 2007 20:07:24 GMT -5
YAY! I am happy too! Berrypaw and Creampaw horray for them! Keep going please!
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Rosepaw
Apprentice
Don't be afraid to die...They're waiting for you...
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Post by Rosepaw on Aug 7, 2007 18:31:15 GMT -5
Thanks Misynight^^
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It was time. Rosestar was excited! She didn't want to screw up on her first naming ceremony. Rosestar took a couple deep breaths. She jumped on top of the rock. She yowled, "All Clan cats please come beneath the rock!" Berrypaw and Creampaw with their mentors, Misynight and Fallenleaf, stepped up front. The two apprentices looked excited yet, very serious. Their mentors looked happy. Rosestar looked at the two apprentices. "Berrypaw and Creampaw, are you ready to become warriors. Do you vow to follow the warrior code and protect your Clan even if it costs your life?" Rosestar anounced. "Yes." Berrypaw said. "Yes, I will." Creampaw said. "By the power of StarClan, I anounce that Berrypaw and Creampaw be named Berrytail and Creamfrost. You are now full fledged warriors of RoseClan." The Clan screamed, "Berrytail! Creamfrost! Berrytail! Creamfrost!"
Rosestar went over to Misynight and Fallenleaf. "They're very impressive cats and what ever you did to train them, you should do for the next." Rosestar said to the two. "Well, We trained together and we past skills to both cats. Fallenleaf said. "Keep it up!" Rosestar praised.
Rosestar curled up in her nest. She was so stressed and tired that she fell asleep in less than a minute. She found herself walking in the forest. Rosestar saw a mouse. She went into hunting position and right when she was about ot strike some thing scared it away. "Hello again sister." Rosestar turned around to see Nightsky standing there. "Hello again brother." She said as she touched noses. Nightsky said, "I have an important message to tell you. Theres terrible danger coming to the forest. Beware of an enemy that seems to be dead but is not..." Rosestar was confused. "What do you mean Nightsky?!" "The answer will come at the time..." He said while fading into nothing.
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Post by Mistynight on Aug 8, 2007 1:53:20 GMT -5
Oh my goodness! I love the name Berrytail and Creamfrost! I was thinking they would be Berrybush and Creampelt..but your names are way better! YAY..
Ohh..but there is a bad prohecy! NOO.....i hope no one gets hurt!
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Rosepaw
Apprentice
Don't be afraid to die...They're waiting for you...
Posts: 60
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Post by Rosepaw on Aug 9, 2007 16:15:27 GMT -5
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Rosestar woke up sweating. "Danger..." She couldn't sleep. Rosestar walked out of her den to talk to Vinepelt. She was the medisine cat. Rosestar wanted to know if she had a dream too. She walked into her den. She saw Vinepelt sorting her herbs. "What's wrong Rosestar? Are you O.K?" "I'm fine, but have you had any dreams leatly about danger coming to the forest?" Vinepelt looked thoughtful, then worried. "I did have a dream. Heartstar told me to beware of an enemy that seems to be dead but is not." She mumbled. Rosestar was worried now. "I had the same dream too, except it was Nightsky who came! Do you really think this danger will be serious?" Vinepelt looked unsure. Finally, Vinepely said, "We'll wait and see."
Rosestar walked out of her den. Rosestar wasn't tired. She desided ot join the Sunhigh patrol. "Firestripe, you may go to your den. You'v been working hard and you havn't been getting much sleep. I'll take your place. Firestripe looked relived. "Thank you Rosestar!" She nodded feeling some empathy for him. "Let's go!" Poppyfoot said. Rosestar let Sandpaw take the lead. "Show me how well you know the territory." Rosestar said. The tabbe nodded and took and lead.
Near the LillyClan border, Blueice said, "I smell mouse!" The small she-cat went into a crouch and in no time, she had cought a plump mouse. They kept going on with the potrol. Once hey got to the end, they turned around and each cat had 2 pieces of fresh kill in their mouth. They dropped it on the fresh kill pile. Rosestar felt refeshed and ready for any thing!
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Post by Flowerclaw-Leland Fan on Aug 9, 2007 20:49:11 GMT -5
Oh! Do more! Now I am reading it! lol
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Post by Mistynight on Aug 10, 2007 1:25:07 GMT -5
Oh wow, i still love it XD! It never gets boring! Keep going please!
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Rosepaw
Apprentice
Don't be afraid to die...They're waiting for you...
Posts: 60
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Post by Rosepaw on Aug 12, 2007 8:55:49 GMT -5
Rosestar went into the nursery. Pandakit, Aloekit, and Thornkit were playing wiht a ball of old moss. Pandakit was a small black and white kit. She was smaller then her sibblings but she was the brightest. Aloekit was a brown kit with spots of white here and there. He sure was small but he got into alot of trouble! Thornkit was very quite. She always listens and nerver gets into trouble.
Rosestar said, "Hi Rednose! Panadakit, Aloekit and Thorn kit are ready for there apprenticing in a half a moon." Rednose looked happy. Rednose said in a tired voice, "Thank you! They've been bugging me to be an apprentice since the first moon!" Thornkit asked, "So we're going to be an apperntice soon?" Rosestar nodded. Aloekit said, "Yay! Can Poppyfoot be my mentor?! I really like her!" Rosestar laughed, "Maybe, but I havn't had an apprentice for moons and one of you will become by apprentice!" All the kits were jumping around and screaming.
Rosestar was thinking about who she was going to chose. She thought, I think I might take Thornkit. She'll be good!
Rosestar desided that she's going to take Thornkit, Mudtail will take Pandakit, and Poppyfoot will take Aloekit. She went to go tell then but to keep it a secret from the kits. Aloekit will be so happy!
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Post by Mistynight on Aug 12, 2007 14:34:35 GMT -5
YAY! Rosestar taking Thornkit! But i think the name Pandakit is the cutest! But Mudtail has her. Please continue!
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Rosepaw
Apprentice
Don't be afraid to die...They're waiting for you...
Posts: 60
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Post by Rosepaw on Aug 13, 2007 16:44:33 GMT -5
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Rosestar couldn't wait ot see their new apprentices! She jumped on top of the High Rock and yowled, "All cats of RoseClan please gather around the High Rock!" All the cats pured out of the dens and the clearing to see the kits go to their next stage. Rosestar announced, "Today, We would like to have Pandakit, Aloekit and Thornkit come in fornt of the Clan to be apprenticed!" The 3 kits scrambled out of the nursery. Once the kits were under the High rock, Rosestar announced, "I call apoun StarClan to shed their greatness apoun these 3 kits. From this day forward until they are Warriors, Pandakit, Aloekit and Thornkit will be Pandapaw, Aloepaw and Thornpaw!" The Clan screamed, "Pandapaw, Aloepaw! Thornpaw!" Rosestar said, "Pandapaw's mentor will be Muntail!" Muntail stepped forward and touched noses with Pandapaw. They walked out of the clearing and began their training. "Aloepaw's mentor will be Poppyfoot! I know how much they have bonded and I think they will make a great team!" Aloepaw pounced up and down waiting to touch noses with Poppyfoot. They scrambled to the side to watch the rest of the gathering. Thornpaw looked happy, yet serious. "Thornpaw's mentor will be me! We will begin training after this." All the cats yowled wiht joy. Rosestar loved this job!
Rosestar took Thornpaw to training. "This is the best place to hunt, right Rosestar?" Rosestar smiled. "Yes! Very good! Over there is LillyClan's territory." Thornpaw replied, "I can smell it! I can smell some thing else too. It smells like...Crow food! Yuck!" Rosestar sniffed. She looked over at the river. Rosestar gasped. "What happened?!"
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Post by Mistynight on Aug 14, 2007 9:24:39 GMT -5
muahahaa..i just read that at the other site now.. MUAHAA..well i still love it. I dont mind reading each part twice XD!
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Post by Hailstorm on Aug 16, 2007 9:32:49 GMT -5
I read yours so far. Please keep going!
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